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Just a Dream? - Page10

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Hey there Guy^^

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Finishing Data: 20.10.2012
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From :icongimmefeedback: -- I appreciate the panel work -- it's very clean and nice. Well thought out, also, draws the attention to the right places. Especially the 3rd panel (one with the door) is kind of cool.

What can you still work on? Anatomy -- Sasuke's head is a little too small for my liking, and Itachi's face in the first panel isn't very cute... Also, something is wrong with Itachi's arms and Sasuke's legs in the 4th panel.

Other than that you're good! :D